October 15, 2012

The Dead One



The dead one
That still dreams about existence
Complains about the dark grave

Weakness in bones
Vacancy in the heart
Recall the passing courage 
Where the passion date

I have been told 
The dead one was brave
Only braves die 
and suffer in graves,
And from the scary tales of death above


Ashamed, if I visit your grave
Afraid, if you ask me that question. 

I know you, you cannot rest 
Untill the people change
You will in every visit
Ask me the question

Any changes in our situation?

Ah, still there is humiliation
Many caught up in your death.

Obituary published with love
Asking, where is now the home of
the brave one?

Affected, Unlikely .. feel outcasted
Sad, unlucky and now buried

Derived strength from the entombed
echo of the whining beloved.

Written first time in ©2010 


Published at ShadiatiQue © 2012

11 comments:

  1. wow this is a heavy piece...it speaks of loss and dealing with its aftermath....and the lost on still visiting...and asking questions...all too real poem...

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  2. Potent and haunting, I reread and reread again.

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  3. Thank you Brian and Anna.

    I got tired writing this from an old note. So I completely forgot to mention that this is shared
    with OpenLinkNight @ dVerse Poets -

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  4. I'll go with Anna on that! Haunting and packs a lot of energy in it! lovely!

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